My first attempt at fractured tales

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Cinderella. She had 2 sisters, the elder sister Genessa was kind of like Cinderella. But Cathleen was the opposite. She was the worse shrew in the country.

One day, the prince had a ball. Cinderella's fairy god mother helped Cinderella and Genessa dress with magic. Cathleen was upset and told herself she would be nicer so that next time Cinderella's god mother would dress her too. At the ball, the prince was struck dumb by Cinderella and Genessa's beauty. He told them he could have over nine thousand and ten hundred wives. He married them and they all lived very happily.

Humpty Dumpty - my first poem

Humpty Dumpty stood on a mat
Humpty Dumpty slipped and he sat
He clutched his bottom coz it hurts so bad
And off he went wailing for his dad

24/11/10

Dear Diary,

Today I had a very good day. The first thing I did at the zoo was to look at all the animals, during the walk we took a tram about 4 times to go to the kids world.

After we got of the second tam drive, I went to feed the manaties. My mummy even got to shakehands with one. I felt neglected. We finally got to kids world.

Mummy and I went to a animal show. Jamie and I went on horseback. (well I meant on seprag horses). Then on a horse carage. (It was the only one in Singapore). 2nd last, we feed the goats. They capt on bleating. Last but not least we went on a caresell. We went to the waterplace to swim and went home.

We had such a good time at the zoo.

Joey

A note to Daddy dearest

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Message to mommy

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Mommy's comments :-

1) I didn't promise 3 presents. The deal is 1 present for every 95 marks attained for a single subject

2) Your writing is a little incoherent. You need to read more and learn to write better.

3) Although you didn't do as well as i've expected you to, i'm happy that you've tried your best.